_JellyJamWritter_

@multisidedfangirl 
          
           I'm glad you like it so far, hopefully I'll update today! I didn't even notice it had a Cinderella feel to it until you pointed it. I'll try not to disappoint with the next few chapters, and thanks for the support 

But when your writing The One please don't make it sound so amazing in the first chapter then mess it up like in other teen fiction/ romantic books do. Your book has an amazing start and like I said many times before I love it so please don't make it confusing like other authors do and then ending up ruining the book not even by the fifth chapter, I can tell you have potential and if you ever need to bounce ideas off of someone I would mind if it's me, ( I am a writer my self but this is not about me it's about you) please continue wring the one it's amazing and is are you!

You and me are a lot alike from the fiction boyfriends in books to the movies on Netflix and I have recently read the first part of your book "The One" and I have to say I love it! I love how it's starts and how you see In to the boy/girls mind it's like a temporary Cinderella story in the first chapter it's super cute but anyway I just wanted to tell you to continue it plz it sounds really good and I'm already in love with it so please don't stop and keep writing!!!!!it could become an amazing  & popular book if you now where to look. 

Thanks for the follow back ^.^ :)