_KatTorres_

@Astromoon 
          I just finished reading the first chap. And i think it was very good. You should work on making the paragraphs longer and not little tidbits, grammer and punctuation we all need help on. But other than that it was pretty good.

Hi
          Can you please check out my book, Camp Emenar, If you have time. I am a new author and would love some feed back.
          
          Thanks
          Moon!