@dramaqueen1o1o Agreed, I kinda wanna write a Dystopia now, but I need to focus on my current work (I'm the type of person that can only focus on one thing at a time).
As soon as I'm done, I'll read it all. The first chapter pulled me in so much, I particularly like the reuse of the "Not the end, but the beginning" line, but I'll reserve my feedback for when I read it all after I fix my story. A few days at max