@ElliTrujillo I am not a fan of the Dolan twins, but here are some pointers: Don't use the word 'and' so much. It's a run on sentence and no one really likes those. Try to use bigger words. When someone is saying something you have to, have to, HAVE to put it in quotes. Ex. 'I was walking down the street when a man catcalled me. "Hey! Pretty lady! Come over here!" He yelled. It was pretty clear that he was drunk.' Like that. Then there are words like 'your,' 'it's,' 'to,' and 'there.' Always use the right terms. Like say "It's (it is) a beautiful day!" Instead of "Its a beautiful day!" or "They're (they are) on their (them, the people/person) way there (past tense of here)." or "You're (you are) so pretty!" "Is that yours (belonging to you)?" or "I love you too (also)." "It's going to (use it when too doesn't sound okay with the sentence) be over there." Punctuation is IMPORTANT! Like I said before, no one likes run on sentences. Use periods instead of the word 'and,' but if it sounds better together use a comma. It's called compound sentences which is usually two sentences together using the words 'and,' 'but,' or 'or.' ALWAYS CAPITALIZE 'I,' 'I'm,' and 'I'll'! Capitalize the first letter of EVERY sentence that is new. Apostrophes are important too. You need them when combing words like it's (it is), won't (will not), don't (do not). However, those are pretty obvious. The words 'well' and 'good' get mixed up a lot too. Like saying "You did good." That's incorrect. You have to put 'well.' And finally, spelling. Correct spelling is important. If you don't know how to spell certain words look it up. You need to proofread your chapters a couple of times before publishing them. Those are my tips and I hope you take what you can from them!
