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Hey..ur book is pretty good :)
          I was also hoping u could check out mh work and maybe vote and comment? Thank u and keep updating ur book! ^^

Everyone check my new story, comment and vote

Check out my new chapter or my new story http://www.wattpad.com/93365767-its-societys-fault-chapter-one-the-beginning-of-it-all

Thank you,Happy New Year to you too!:) 

So far, it's actually really good, like the some of the others have pointed out, there are some grammar/spelling problems but nothing that cant be fixed in 15 minutes, good job and happy New Year:)

Thankyou very much. There something really interesting what happens through the middle of the book. I will have a look:-) 

I should learn from my mistakes looks like a well written story; I will read more of this. Please could you read The Prophecy? It is a brilliant short apocalyptic novel by Jordan Bryant. If you could vote/comment on all of his chapters that you might enjoy it would be appreciated?
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/1819605-the-prophecy-watty-awards-2012
          
          Best Wishes
          
          Dellboy:)