sw1tchB0ySt0ner
What happened to dying in LA?
_MegoTheEggo_
Jeremy-o3o
Hey there, I just finished reading "Dying In LA," and I gotta say, I absolutely loved it! Your writing style is nice and neat and all of the plot twists made me not want to put it down! So congrats to you, you made a book that I genuinely really, really, REALLY, like! :D
_Tyler_Joseph_
I love everything you do
Btw have a nice day
TheBandTrials
Love your pfp❤️❤️
_MegoTheEggo_
Yes most likely!
_Tyler_Joseph_
Well here *gives medal* have this for having the best x-readers I've ever read
THEY ARE AMAZING AND I LOVE THEM
_MegoTheEggo_
SKSKSKSKS I’m-
I would like to thank my mom but not my dad. He’s still at CVS.
(Btw love your pfp. IM WAITING FOR MY P*RNO TO LOAD)
_MegoTheEggo_
Hey guys!
So I recently got a tiny surgery on my neck.
So long story short, I had a mole on my neck that was getting bigger and turning white.
I got it checked out and they mentioned cancer.
They said it’s slim to none but still a possibility.
So they took it off and I have 4 stitches in my neck right now.
It hurts like hell.
It’s in lab testing right now.
So I’m gonna take a break from all my books and focus on school.
I have a D.
That’s the lowest my grade havre ever gotten.
Thank you for being so patient!
Stay alive and make sure to close the goddamn door!
Mego
eiresaints
@_MegoTheEggo_ oh no!i hope you make a good recovery,i am sick rn aswell with an er infection and possiable tonsillitis :/
_MegoTheEggo_
Sksksk I don’t like the update no thank you!
garlics4lt
Hi! Is it ok if I give some criticism? I enjoy your books I just feel that here’s some thing you need to pick up on!!
garlics4lt
Okay, while reading ur Brendon Urie x reader, I notice you never (or very occasionally) use commas, and you always write in this kind of “list” form? And they aren’t proper paragraphs.
So instead of writing like:
I wake up.
I check my phone to see if Brendon has texted me.
He has!
It made my day there and then.
^
The style is very choppy and quite uncomfortable to read, as there are so many full stops it feels very tense and dramatic, but really it’s just your boyfriend texting you good morning. It’s quite uncomfortable to read.
You should maybe write like:
I wake up and roll over to check my phone to see if Brendon has texted me, I see that he has, I smile as the message makes my day immediately.
^
This style flows, and doesn’t feel choppy or tense. It’s more comfortable to read-not just because it flows, it’s because it’s an actual paragraph, not a list of what you did today!!
One last thing, lay off that return button until you’re finished with the paragraph!
So instead of:
I wake up. [return]
I check my phone to see if Brendon has texted me. [return]
He has! [return]
It made my day there and then. [return]
^
Go like:
wake up and roll over to check my phone to see if Brendon has texted me, I see that he has, I smile as the message makes my day immediately.
[return, new paragraph]
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I bid you greatness in the future!!
PLUR!!
yeet214
Hhh WHY DON'T YOU HAVE THAT MANY FOLLOWERS DAMMIT