Hey potatoe, hahaha it's me macs.
So the description is great, it's hinting a mystery in your book but it would be great to put some iconic phrases.
As for the prologue, I liked it. It introduces the characters' background story and their attiudes, their behaviors.
I'm not much of an angst reader so I'm really sorry hahaha,,, and I also write in 3rd person's pov. I advice using that pov, it's really great as you can dictate what was happening all at once, but it's alright using a 2nd person's pov as well if you're just going to use Adi from the very start.
Welp welp,,, hahahah that's all.
