_Raheema

Happy Birthday Tae Tae

yourstruly_shai

Can you read, vote, and comment on my new chapter and let me know what I need to do to improve it please? thank you

_Raheema

Anyways I read over your work , but I need to actually have access to your writing and actually be able to edit it and be able to make changes  to do what you asked for
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yourstruly_shai

Yes please. I need help no using the word "I" so much
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_Raheema

Ofc you want me to go over your word choice? I mean that's what I do best
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yourstruly_shai

Thanks for the follow! Maybe you could comment and votes for my story sometime? I appreciate it!

yourstruly_shai

Lol. Thank you
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_Raheema

Hmm? Yeah sure I'd love too read your book! And the follow? No problem,What's the A.R.M.Y for?
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_Raheema

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_Raheema

And thank you @Unknown_Weird_ for voting for my FT fanfic as well

_Raheema

K lemme know if you want to change your mind ✌️
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_Raheema

Thank you! That means a lot! Is there anything in particular you'd like to have in the story? I can try and accommodate it in @unknown_weird_
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