_Savren_

Enjoyers of Dragon’s Legacy:
          	
          	Please heed and listen to @IsaiahWarner7 on my notes. Listening to “Monsters” by James blunt while reading chapter 55 makes the chapter far, far more emotional then it already is.
          	
          	To me, chapter 55 is one of the most emotional chapters I have ever written, and I myself always feel the deepest parts of my heart when I read it, since it comes from a more personal part of me, and this song… well. :’)
          	
          	Do listen to it while reading chapter 55 ❤️

IsaiahWarner7

Ok, i realized that James blunt is perfect for dragon's legacy(and possibly the sequels). His entire album "back to bedlam" fits very well, the soft slow and emotional songs are beautiful, and the album has " your beautiful"(his biggest hit) and "goodbye my lover" (one of hit biggest hits). And the one song that isn't in this album, that in my opinion fits the best with daemion "monsters"

IsaiahWarner7

@_Savren_ you've never heard of him! Wow you need to get out more!...... actually i take that back, don't get out there. Stay inside and keep writing your story.....let me know what you think of his music though
Reply

_Savren_

The monsters pulled out my heart strings. I will try all his songs today! I had not listened to him before yesterday, but thank you for introducing him to me!
Reply

IsaiahWarner7

You know i was thinking of the GoT and HoTD era. I'm curious how you're gonna do things. Right now daemion's family is still like family(even if they're mad at each other) since the oldest in each family are siblings. But eventually when the family gets more removed, daemion's will become like a cadet branch. I'm wondering how that will work. Especially in the balckfyre rebellions. Will daemion exclusive line even exist? I mean after the dance there are barely any targs, will daemions branch go to KL and intermingle with the main branch to they'll just go together. Or will they stay separate and there is a clear line where each prince of dragonstone is a direct descent of maegor.
          
          And in GoT will the dameion be the brother of dany(or replace jon snow as lyanna's son)....of course this implies that daemions line mended with the main line. Or will daemion be dany's cousin. 
          
          I'm sure there will be at least one targ king who is sick of the cadet dragonstone branch, especially when the blackfyre rebellions they will be concerned that there are Targaryen that are separate from them. They will want to either get rid of them or bring them completely together (depending on the king). 
          
          I do think you should have a long prologue going over a brief history over the almost 200 year time gap, how history changed with the extra line

_Savren_

@IsaiahWarner7 Trust in my vision brother :)
Reply

IsaiahWarner7

@_Savren_ ok, . I just started thinking and going on a rant about. "How's this all gonna work?"
Reply

_Savren_

You know how i operate, that I do not spoil anything in regard of my story, but I will tell you a few things vaguely :) 
            
            Daemion is around for Dance of Dragons, which the timing of Dance, for the sake of story, has also changed. But you can be sure that he will be an older man by then… and Dance? Let us say every single Targaryen will be beyond just impacted by it. 
            I will say this too: be open to anything that may come to pass for Daemion the Black Dragon’s bloodline… anything is possible. 
            
            I did cover a small thing in chapter 100 of dragon’s legacy, that Daemion will be Remembered, more than anything, his *Deeds*, rivers of blood. But no need to worry, because if the Burden of Legacy and the third instalment are received well, I will do a fourth instalment as the final instalment and a conclusion of to the entire saga of not just The Legacy Trilogy, but also for A song of ice and fire and the Great War against the Others. 
Reply

IsaiahWarner7

Ok. "Unbreak my heart" for when rhaena reunites with daemion after years. 
          
          And "another love", not sure exactly when, but it's about being unable to give yourself fully to someone because your stuck on another love. Can't remember exactly when this is when daemion realizes that he could never give himself to her like he can with rhaena

IsaiahWarner7

Actually "your beautiful" should be when rhaena is set to marry aegon, and daemion is thinking about her
Reply

IsaiahWarner7

Though honestly i don't think these songs fit quite as well as monsters. Simply because love is complicated and different with each person. While grief is universal, and songs about it can be applied to almost anyone
Reply

IsaiahWarner7

And another james blunt song "your beautiful", for when daemion and rhaena see each other on dragonstone as teenagers and daemion is like "i need her". Though one line is "she was with another man". While rhaena wasn't officially with aegon then, i think daemion at least knew that it'd be hard to marry her since i think it'd be expected for her to marry her.
Reply

_Savren_

Enjoyers of Dragon’s Legacy:
          
          Please heed and listen to @IsaiahWarner7 on my notes. Listening to “Monsters” by James blunt while reading chapter 55 makes the chapter far, far more emotional then it already is.
          
          To me, chapter 55 is one of the most emotional chapters I have ever written, and I myself always feel the deepest parts of my heart when I read it, since it comes from a more personal part of me, and this song… well. :’)
          
          Do listen to it while reading chapter 55 ❤️

IsaiahWarner7

Hey, I listened to monsters by james blunt....i think that perfectly fits how daemion felt when maegor died. Listen to it, recommend the readers to listen to it while reading the chapter when daemion is dealing with his death

IsaiahWarner7

@_Savren_ i think I'll find 3, one for the beginning where it's this forbidden. Then i found one for while daemion was away with his other great love( "another love") then one for when they reunite. Because those are all very different
Reply

_Savren_

@IsaiahWarner7 Have a blessed Thanksgiving with your family in the light of our Heavenly Father, brother ❤️ Every moment with family is a blessing.
            As for the song? You managed to find a song that would not only perfectly matches chapter 55, but makes it even better! So if anyone can find a song or theme for Daemion and Rhaena, it would be you! ❤️
Reply

IsaiahWarner7

@_Savren_ P.S I'm going to go on a long ride to visit my grandparents for Thanksgiving. I'm gonna spend the ride re reading your amazing story ♥️. I'm also gonna find a song that perfectly fits the love of rhaena and daemion, trust me i will
Reply

IsaiahWarner7

You gotta remember to put your stories top scores on dragons legacy description. Like it had #1maegorthecruel and #1orginal. And i think at one point one other as well

_Savren_

@IsaiahWarner7 I just took your advise and did so. I believe the Dragon’s legacy does deserve to be acknowledged for the successes it had when it was being published.
Reply

IsaiahWarner7

Visenya! That was the one, i remember at one point you were #1 with her. I certainly loved the way you portrayed her.
Reply

IsaiahWarner7

Just recommended you on asoiaf reddit, the owner of the reddit asked what people have been reading i put your story(along with 2 others)

_Savren_

That is genuinely so kind of you! By lord you have to be one my most supportive readers Isaiah! Which thread did you post that on??
Reply

IsaiahWarner7

Savren, just noticed you changed dragon's legacy cover. What inspired you to do that? Though i do think it's cool(and kinda funny) that each story kinda focuses on the hair. Daemion definitely give femboy vibes(at least in looks)

IsaiahWarner7

@_Savren_ i was spending some time on ao3, and of course algebra. So i haven't been on wattpad recently
Reply

_Savren_

Ayoo! It’s been sometime since I read anything or heard from you! How you been doing brother?
            As for the change of cover, I will not lie to you, I never really liked the first cover, because it was very inaccurate (in the case of how Daemion looked like) and it was misleading (given his eyepatch).  The new cover does show that Daemion is appealing and the emphasize on his long black hair, which as you know, is the most repeated and one of the main focuses of the story.  
            As for Daemion looks? Well, he was beautiful Daemion Targaryen XD    All Targaryen are androgynous (except for a few of them, like Maegor) 
Reply

_Savren_

I’m sorry for the lack of updates. This week I had 2 midterms and a book review but next chapter will be out soon since it is already finished and ready to be delivered ❤️

_Savren_

@IsaiahWarner7 Welcome to college life man. “Best years of your life” they say. It’s not untrue but neither it is true :’)      But i take my head off to you for learning algebra, because I’m actually so bad in it. University and college is a completely different cloth but still fundamentally the same thing. The duality of college am I right?
Reply

IsaiahWarner7

@_Savren_ totally understand, i just started college after taking a gap year...dude it's rough, i feel like i lost all my momentum, taking that years off was nice but now I'm paying for it, i have to relearn algebra because i forgot it(i took advanced algebra when i was younger, so I finished my math in highschool in the 11th grade, so i haven't done math in 2 years) and I'm also having a hard time studying....i feel like i have to relearn how to go to school....but I'm hanging in there. Focus on school man, write when you have time and energy. And only then.
Reply

_Savren_

“What makes a monster and what makes a man?”
          
          Or perhaps one must ask a different question…? :)

IsaiahWarner7

@_Savren_ sorry the paranoia "isn't" helping. Not "is". Lol
Reply

IsaiahWarner7

@_Savren_ it wasn't just the fact that his captain died in his place, the war became real for him. Before they were looking for the terriost but now he said it felt like they were being hunted and at any moment they could be jumped. For the rest of his time he was scared that they were gonna be attacked at any waking moment.
            
            In the story there should be a time where daemion is caught off guard, where he and his group are attacked(doesn't even have to be a green boy, daemion could be good at attacking an enemy. But being the one attacked is totally different. Especially off gaurd) and daemion survives of course but he loses most his men, but for a while daemion is super stressed out, seeing shadows everywhere. Becoming a bit paranoid(a bit of targ madness) like he's waiting to be surprise attacked again. 
            
            But eventually he overcomes his struggle and paranoia with the help of his lover, helping him to realize that the paranoia is helping, that the constant worry isn't keeping them safer(that's how daemion will see it, that's he's staying alert looking for the enemy. And during this paranoia time he won't sleep with his love because he feel that will distract him) that he can plan ahead, create better patrols, but the best he can do is "keep his head on the swivel" not looking at every crack on the wall every second of the day.
Reply

_Savren_

@IsaiahWarner7 Thank your Uncle for his service. Serving in a place as such as the army requires a warrior's heart and unbreakable will, no matter the role.
            As for what will happen to Daemion and his friends and mentors, he has found? No need to worry, my friend. Daemion's character aecs are all written down and all the reasons behind them. He will be the proof of every change.
Reply