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Finally!I can vote,comment and add to reading list!I did so for this story!I am so curious about their reactions! Please continue with it! Me and every other reader is waiting so keep it on!

I am sorry I don't know how to vote.Due to differences I made my suggestions.And about death I wanted you to take it as Wei Wuxian first time death when he destroyed Yin hu fu before his death.Ah!You told there fun to come so thank you for that!I am furios because I can't make reading list or vote so all I can do for now is to comment.And thank you again for considering my suggestions to see whether you can add them or not.

Number 3.We surely would like to see that Wei Wuxian doesn't remember Lan Wangji confession at all and how he speaks in his mind about Lsn Zhan and his true skem nature,his care for Lsn Zhan and his skills in his mind again along side all of embarrassing moments.
          Number 4.I hope that when in Yun ping city they parted due to misunderstanding it won't be like the original book but something lighter (not actually rejected n the bed but some lighter situation and a heart breaking and a little embarrassing and shocking one but not that of MDZS original book.
          Number 5.I hope you show especially in the told story in the book in the story which characters are watching shows how caring and lonely Wei Wuxian is and he is also not really wanting revenge for himself but justice so every one who is watching will be influenced by it.
          Number 6.For the current Wei Wuxian to confess his love to Lan Zhan much sooner since  he is aware of Lan Zhan love for him and realize his feeling for Lan Zhan sooner because he give though throwly to it and get pumped by Hanguanjun.
          Number 6.For him to be bought that fancy toy again (and maybe many things else) and him joking in both past and present with juniors so the story becomes.es also funny.
          I know that my thoughts are really demanding and insolent ones to be put and form in your story but I really thought about it and I hope that you do my wish.If you don't do so I understand and if you do specially the first one which is surely for the next chapters.
          Please read from my first till this message now and reply to it.Thank you for your wonderful story again.

Wei Wuxian finally become frustrated and get into a fighting with Lan Wangji and says how can he answer Lanji while he is not sure whether his feelings is love or not and describe his feelings and confusion and say that he can't answer his question while he is not sure himself and Lang ji when he sees Wei Wuxian in the book kills himself and doesn't know about his confessing and wasn't rejected but not knowing as well become both happy and frustrated and Wei Wuxian demands Lan Wangji to confess to him and be nice to him in order to get confident and his felling become deeper.
          Also there are lots of funny stuff that I would like you to use in your book.
          Number 1.In the MDZS animating  Wei Wuxian doesn't say he stole donkey but rather found it and took him as his subordinate and Sizhui says (in MDZS animation he told it) that Mo young master is funny.
          Number 2.I would like that the story of those doll wooden toy whis a little 6 years old Axian was making and Lan Wangji gave his fancy toy to Wei Ying become revealed and See delighted WEI WUXIAN,LAN WANJI,LAN XICHEN AND JIANG CHENG with a dramatic Huaisang who will surely become very happy and talkative and gossipy about it.

It will also become like Xue Yang,Song Lan and Xiao Xingchen and the blind girl.In which in that story Song Lan lost all of his clan members due to Xue Yang revenge and Xingchen gives his eyes to Song Lan and The girl sho is clever and become aware will become a victim and Xue Yang whom his character is somehow the same like Jin Guang Yao tells that why he plays always hero and do bad to Cingchen in both Xiao Xingchen life and death the same happen between Wei Wuxian,Jiang Cheng,Jiang Yanli,Lan Zhan and Jin Guang Yao who they are all under Jin Guang Shan game (whether it is Xue Yang group or Jin Guang Yao group).Wei Wuxian story will be somehow the same as Xiao Xingchen story which both lose important part of bodies,important skills which they didn't have control,killing whom they didn't just want,losing their most beloved ones and in the end they both (Wei Wuxian and Xiao Xingchen) commit suicide.So the cultivators will become sad,ashamed and see the truth is far from the rumors that spreaded.

I am really sorry for suggesting you to guide the story and maybe even change it a little or so much but I hope you do so and I will be grateful for it.
          Number 1.Wei Wuxian wake up in few days while Hanguangjun is not there and he doesn't remember how he got there in his cave at all because he was drowned in darkness and was dreaming.But he got besieged and when his brother stab him so badly he thinks every one in the world who loved him specially his sister is dead and every one else in the world hate him because he did not hear Lan Wangji at all.So due to this he kills himself because he feels he is alone and caused his beloved deaths and the rest of the world hates him and want him dead while he is not aware of Lan Zhan's emotions at all but he destroys Yin Hu Fu before his death and then perform a some kind of demonic formation for a good purpose but which it also kills him while at the same time the others think that he died due to a failure of a demonic ritual and do not realize the truth at all (in the book) but in present time the others see it and become more sad and ashamed because of it.

Continue of my first message _ moment which Wei Wuxian due to pain and submission to Yin hu fu darkness finally passed away in his place which was Burial Mounds and because of it he wasn't aware of his surroundings in real world at all and he was in his mental world while he was definitely dreaming and Lan Wangji was not that much better which he was exhausted and only his strong will and love kept him sane but it still showed both of their weakness any way but they were still in Wei Wuxian's home so no one would come after them at that moment so Lan Wangji won't need to defend Wei Wuxian at t least that moment.
          Number 4.Wri Wuxian in real world when they are watching the book scenes definitely feels something but can't say he either love Lan Zhan or doesn't love due to confusion and that it was too sudden and he is really care about Lan Zhan and want Lan Zhan to take responsibility for him and happy to be protected by him while a misunderstanding happened in which only Xichen and Sizhui understand.

Hello.I am reading 'Untamed Feeling' story.I know I have no right for suggestions but I would like you to read,consider and add your touch since you told that this story is actually MDZS parallel but not the same.And we are seeing that it is definitely not the same whether with the past story or the reaction of the characters to the past story.
          Number 1.In this story Wei Wuxian is not driving away Lan Wangji whether in past or present but actually yearning for his attention and comforting.
          Number 2.Wei Wuxian didn't escape with Lan Wangji's from battle field while he collapsed and failed but the opposit happened,his emotions died from inside,he wasn't hearing at all but he saw that every one was either killed or unconscious and he was even finally able to land safely (even though it was swaying) and then was able to walk at least a few steps before Lan Wangji take him away because he wanted Wei Wuxian to arrive fast and in a place that sole power was within his hands.
          Number 3.Even though Wei Wuxian seemed to reject Lan Wangji(every one assumed so but Lan Xichen and Wei Wuxian and Sizhui know that it is a misunderstanding) he wasn't conscious at all and he wasn't hearing the other.Because we actually saw that Wei Wuxian wanted his death to be in Lan Wangji's hand and there is no way for him to pull him away when he wanted to say something important to him which was that he doesn't know whether even one of them will make it out alive from this situation and declared his love for him.
          Number 4.Lan Wangji didn't hide Wei Wuxian in a cave(an unknown cave any way) but actually the demon_blood cave in Burial Mounds which is different from MDZS and this story because they didn't escape rashly from a battle field which Wei Wuxian was going to ie and hide some unknown place but actually when apart from Wei Wuxian and Lan Wangji who were weak but still Able to walk when every one else and really every other cultivater was knocked out but they were the only sane ones at that

@Syul-Jie I think the gap is good... before publishing i wrote 10 chapters then i wasn't able to write...I just added two more chapters to it.. today i edited the chapters for yesterday.