@ IStillBelieveInMagic I downloaded it from Ao3 and read that you have a wattpad page. This is the least I can do. I don't like that ao3 doesn't let you like every chapter.(But I love that I can download it and read from MoonReader) I have a lot of good things to say about your story, but I don't like getting distracted by writing a comment to each chapter. I still have 4 chapters to go, and I am dreading it. It's hard to find good fanfiction. You need to dig through 100 bad ones. What is surprising, I found yours the moment I got an urge to read about Anakin. And I regret finding it, you are breaking my heart with that unfinished status)))
You are crazy good, and I am not saying it lightly. Sometimes, there are good writers, but they writing style is slow, too slow, that it makes me bored. Looking at your style, you have the same amount of words, and not once was I bored. The way you incorporate some 'stories' in there like Scorpio and a frog, I just know you will be juicing it in the future, and it will hit deep. Or that dream she keeps having, something in me thinks that she might start changing her behavior in there, the more confident she becomes and vice versa. Also, I didn't forget about her picking that lightsaber. Why wasn't it mentioned after? You are trying to cover the tracks. Hmm. Something about it. Plus, her blind bullseye *criminal offense side eye*.
If I am to take a guess, you will have her stuck training with Anakin. But I still have 4 chapters to go, so I will get right on it. Have a good, productive day. xD