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Hey everyone!
I wanted to let you all know that I won’t be able to update until the first week of May. I don’t want you to keep waiting or wondering about the next update.
Right now, I have a lot on my plate, and I’m struggling to focus on writing. I know some of you might be wondering why I even started if I can’t update consistently—I completely understand. I’m really sorry that things aren’t going as planned.
I’ll do my best to provide regular updates from May’s first week onward.
Thank you for everything! Take care!
SarahVarghese3
Dearest Smilyvi,
As you suggested your book and while reading "Threads of Destiny" felt like watching a skilled weaver at work, carefully interlacing threads of emotion and fate. Your ability to create such a poignant narrative, especially for a debut, is truly commendable.
I want to offer both my heartfelt appreciation and some constructive observations, blending the enthusiasm of a reader with the analytical eye of a reviewer, all while remembering the incredible accomplishment of reaching so far in your first book.
From the very beginning, when you introduced the subtle pull of the "threads," I was hooked. Remember the scene where Aarav felt an inexplicable draw towards Sayi in the bustling bookstore while colliding to her? That moment, with its subtle tension and unspoken connection, perfectly captured the essence of your story. You masterfully established the central conflict: are these characters puppets of destiny, or do they possess the agency to carve their own paths?
The emotional depth you achieved is a significant strength. When Aarav confronted their deepest fear of losing her as Sayı found out about him loving her from the moment she saved his father and started overthinking the whole feeling, the raw vulnerability you portrayed resonated deeply. I felt their pain, their uncertainty, and their unwavering hope. That ability to evoke such strong emotions is a gift.
You’ve crafted Sayi that truly embodies the strength and resilience of a middle-class elder daughter, and her sense of self-respect shines through every interaction.Sayi isn’t just a character; she’s a representation of countless women who carry the weight of family responsibilities while striving to maintain their own identity. I loved the way you have portrayed truly supportive parents as it’s ideal for many but let’s hope everyone gets parents to be like them.
_SmilyVi
@SarahVarghese3 Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback! It truly means a lot to know that my story resonated with you. Your kind words motivate me to keep writing. I appreciate your support! Love you ❤️
SarahVarghese3
Where else, talking about Aarav isn't a stereotypical romantic hero. He's flawed, vulnerable, and grappling with his own internal conflicts, which makes him incredibly relatable. He wasn't simply a passive participant in fate; he actively questioned and challenged it.
However, as a reader, I also noticed areas where the narrative could be further refined. The pacing, too, felt uneven at times. Some scenes, while emotionally rich, lingered, while others seemed rushed. For instance, the transition from one chapter to another felt abrupt in some places but as an author I myself have felt difficulty in refining the pacing and ensuring that each scene contributes to the overall narrative arc would enhance the story's flow.
Despite these observations, your talent for emotional storytelling shines brightly. You’ve created characters I genuinely cared about, and I was invested in their journeys.
Remember, every writer faces challenges, and your willingness to explore complex themes and emotions is admirable. Your passion for storytelling is evident, and "Threads of Destiny" is a testament to your dedication. With each story you write, you'll continue to grow and refine your craft. I'm excited to see where your writing takes you next. Your ability to make the readers feel, is a great gift. Please continue to share your stories.
_SmilyVi
Oh wow, 90 reads and just one comment? Seriously?
Do you guys even exist, or am I just entertaining ghosts here?
At this point, even a ‘hi’ would feel like a standing ovation.
Anyway, I’ll just log off now—enjoy the silence i guess!
_SmilyVi
Vertikajain4
When will you update next chapter author
MinakshiTripathi2
Next update when ?
_SmilyVi
Ch 51 is up!
_SmilyVi
Ch 50 is up!
_SmilyVi
Happy Makar Sankranti to my beautiful souls ! May your day be filled with joy, positivity, and lots of sweet treats! ☀️✨
