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 *gives your cake* do you want it??

@ItsMeDavidXD Do you want me to PM your feedback since (like above) I like to go in deep and give helpful example as if I was writing it.

@ItsMeDavidXD So, I've read a few chapters of Suicide Squad and it's really good. There are only a few things that i would personally alter. I don't think you need the introduction with character names and powers. Try including them in the first chapter meeting or a scene with some new recruits of ever after when they are out and let their powers come into practise. They can talk to each other and mention back story throughout.
          
          P.S (just a helpful hint)
          Third person or a character per chapter(if you have read Heroes of Olympus it would be quite similar. Just a character for a chapter or two then switch) would be better for this type of story as there are so many characters and switching can confuse you and your audience.
          
          I still think it is a good story though and I am enjoying it so far. ☺

@ItsMeDavidXD All my covers don't really fit the story so if you could just scan through one and it'll be really helpful.

@ItsMeDavidXD Yeah sure. Do you want criticism (if i can give any) or simply reading and votes. I don't mind. 

@-Harley_Quinn No it's fine not a lot of people don't know the film. It's just that I've been listening to the soundtrack.

@-Harley_Quinn Milk and Cookies just got in my head through over listening and it being quite easy to remember through the 1.. 2.. pattern. I just love them all. Have you heard of the film 'Sucker Punch'?

@-Harley_Quinn I like Mad Hatter or Milk and Cookies. But I think I know all the lyrics by heart.

@-Harley_Quinn Yeah but I didn't know about the special edition so I missed out on 3. It's still so good though.

@-Harley_Quinn I've got Melanie Martinez's album and I'm loving it.