_TheLastAntagonist

@_TheLastAntagonist Also sorry I forgot to mention, my story is dark like really really dark and it can be possible that you may find it uncomfortable. So if at any point you find it uncomfortable please you do not need to read it further okay ☺️ and yeah you can leave it at any point you find sensitive content.

@_Nidzzz_ okay thankyou so much ☺️☺️☺️. You can definitely point out the grammatical mistakes wherever you find it's not a problem infact it's actually helpful so that I can correct it. And bingo you are right my characters are the strength in this story. My story really needs a lot of patience for the readers to read. And yeah fillers were needed to set the base of the story that's why it had so many fillers. Umm apart from it I can't give you any spoilers because this love intrest thing is actually a part of the story and I can't tell you more about it. Sorry about that. 
            Also thankyou thankyou so much for giving my story a chance. By the way how much did you read it?? (•‿•)(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)❣️❣️

@_Nidzzz_ So far from what I've read, I think it's a good start! Romance certainly isn't my kind of writing but knowing WattPad the more you spread your story around. The bigger your audience grows, especially with these types of stories.
            
            I'd say your biggest strength of your story is your characters. As they definitely seem like people I know or are apart of my friend group right now. Very good job on making believable characters 
            
            You also do a great job at descriptions, the scene where Ellie and Kevin were looking at the city from their view was amazing. I could totally picture it even though I don't live smack in the middle of NYC.
            
            A weakness I noticed was that it didn't hook me in at first. Although an introduction to your main character is nice, we didn't meet the love interest until 2/3's of the 2nd chapter. Which meant there was so much filler for the first half, & knowing myself I would've clicked off and found something else to read.
            
            I'd say another con I noticed was some formatting issues. But it could just be a 'me' thing. I don't like large, clumped-up paragraphs. Especially with dialogue as they usually need a line to themselves. Also saw some minor spelling/grammatical errors. But I make the same mistakes so I can't judge.
            
            Sorry for the delayed answer, I'm on summer vacation so I just got back from a trip.