_xsma_
Thanks for the vote on my story. The story needs a big edit, so I know it terrible.
_xsma_
@_Thech0sen1 I wrote that book a long time ago, but I unpublished it, and I decided to publish it as it was. Thank you so much for the lovely feedback .
_Thech0sen1
@_xsma_ no lovely, as your first book it was amazing, i really enjoyed but as an author you if you do not feel satisfied with the story you can always improve it and make it better.