@reinedesfleurs But thank really I know I sound rude but I swear I do appreciate everyone's opinions it made my story better and now I can't ask for more. Thank you
@reinedesfleurs Although I do enjoy your kind criticizim. I have to disagree with you on the fact that I use te wrong grammatical terms in my story. I know the different between they're, their and there. I use them all correctly in my story. I know I might make two or three mistakes but I do know my grammar.