Nooo.. Really not... I haven't noticed any serious mistakes in your story so that to make you re-write it again... And If any so, i didn't feel any prblm with it. We all make mistakes even me too and as far as I concerned, while reading, we all trying to make out the correct mode of your story out of your mistakes...
Well, I'm waiting for your story to be publish again and im expecting it with a full of good hopes. You know why?? That much i loved your story while reading it.. And i hope you'll publish it as early as possible...
Bye, with♥