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Yeah, I'm not hugely bothered on feedback for worldbuilding nor story. I'm more interested in the writing style as I'm trying to keep it as close to the original novel as possible in terms of style of writing if that makes sense.
Basically, instead of writing how most people write fanfics, I've tried to write it as if it was an actual book. Still though, I'll probably add some context for people, just to help them understand it slightly more.
I'll most likely release the chapter later on today so look out for the announcement I guess.