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@K-A-Y-V-A 
            
            You give good points there. That's what I'm doing in my current fic, I'll definitely stick to it in that one. My problem is that I'm not great at coming up with names for chapters that hint to the content without revealing anything so I end up getting stuck on name ideas lol.

I like a number and a name together, it’s dramatic and thinking of titles is interesting. And in my experience—writing and reading—it makes it easier to remember what/when things happen. 

@FinoBtw 
            
            See, that's my thought process and is probably what I'll do in any future fanfics. Just curious what others thought.

I didn't get them :(
            
            Genuinely depressed..

@K-A-Y-V-A 
            
            Yeah, I'm not hugely bothered on feedback for worldbuilding nor story. I'm more interested in the writing style as I'm trying to keep it as close to the original novel as possible in terms of style of writing if that makes sense.
            
            Basically, instead of writing how most people write fanfics, I've tried to write it as if it was an actual book. Still though, I'll probably add some context for people, just to help them understand it slightly more.
            
            I'll most likely release the chapter later on today so look out for the announcement I guess.

I’d give it a go :) 
            
            If you only want feedback on the writing style, there isn’t a need for context. But if you want feedback on the story, a blurb or something would work. Still though it’s your story, if it was my story I would not care about feedback on the plot or worldbuilding. 

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@DeprivedSleeper 
            
            Might be a while lol, I haven't touched the fic since I published the last chapter..