Ok so I haven’t seen/ been paying attention to Grammar errors but what I can speak on is character interactions and chemistry, and you have done a good damm job with that. Another point is the method you use to bring info into the story I love the mysterious,misleading and twist transition one way you use is was with introducing his sister when she was first seen there was a mystery of who she was then her actions lead me to believe that she might be a villain and at the end there was the twist of oh she’s not apart of this generic “my sibling is the villain plot”
