__ShaquannaB

@Concieted_Gangsta yes sister? 

jadexmaria

@Mrz_ALSINA umm like for looking for my thug Bria is always getting a boyfriend or a new guy in like every other chapter because trey Keeps on being with some hoes or whatever and she is honestly living to luxurious like make her hcve some type of struggle  and if a boy likes her make her go out with him after a while not just like when she meets them at a party or sum and they just go on a date the next Day  and they know where she lives and also make your chapters long and interesting and also make some of Bria boyfriends have ex girlfriends who do stuff to try and make Bria and her boyfriend break up . Be more descriptive and don't always have her fighting let her cuss the girls sometimes and when she is at clubs make some guys just dance with her not always TWERKING UP A STORM! With one of her friends