Lumoswrts

Hii, I'm so happy with your votes ..Thank you so much bro ..How is it? Can you give review,+ve and -ve's too..

___Bonhomie___

@Lumoswrts No, it's fine. Everyone makes mistakes. Actually, that's how it is: you start talking about one topic, but suddenly you divert into another related to the main topic. Eventually, you forget to stick to the main topic only. I hope I am making sense, and yes, it's your first book you can edit and improve it whenever you get time:)
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Lumoswrts

@Lumoswrts Actually reg other couples Aditya and Naina are 2nd leads, and for Meera and Arjun I thought of just introducing them but I got excited and messed up .. No excuses but this is my first book so I just wanted to promote my other books through this ( in the last chapters after the plot ) but it went messy *crying emoji* ..I'll try to edit them when I get time ..Thanks for the review
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summerwrites_26

Hey there, dear reader! 
          
          I hope you're having a great day! 
          If you're up for reading requests, I'd be really glad if you could check out my book "The Hate Pact". It's a saga of love, hate, thriller and suspense. (I'm sorry if this message disturbed you ^^ )
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/394538757?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=summerwrites_26

Vanyraverse_

Hi reader!! I hope you’re doing well.
          
          I just wanted to share that I’ve started writing my first story. It’s a slow burn with a touch of mystery and a lot of emotions.
          
          If that’s your kind of story, you can give it a try. I’d truly love to hear your thoughts if you do.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/410120412?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Vanyraverse_

HaSh_browwn

Btw..I just finished reading TEXTROVERT which you suggested me...And TYSM yrr!! I absolutely loved it, like loved loved it..such an amazing book with equally amazing characters and dialogues..
          KEITH is such a pure soul...And although I can't relate to Iris much, because I am quite opposite..But I now understand what it's like to be an introvert or more of a TEXTROVERT..
          
          Thank you once again ! (⁠◕⁠ᴗ⁠◕⁠✿⁠)

HaSh_browwn

@___Bonhomie___ By being rude I mean, like sometimes I try to get on his nerves or annoy him, uk try to build that enemies to lovers trope..But I was not so lucky (⁠〒⁠﹏⁠〒⁠)
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HaSh_browwn

@___Bonhomie___ ohh ! You shooed a guy by ignoring him and I did by being mean... like if someone has a crush on me and If I get the hint, I become a total meany to them so that they stay away.
            And on the other side, if I HAVE A CRUSH on a guy, I make it too obvious by being overly energetic or I ruin it by being rude (to get his attention)...in all these cases I have kinda regretted doing what I did.
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HaSh_browwn

Hey ! I just picked LOVE WASN'T ENOUGH from your Yet to read...out of curiosity I read a few chapters and the ML is kinda emotionally cheating on his wife and now he is gonna grovel and probably they will end up together... so just a heads up ! I just didn't like it 

HaSh_browwn

@___Bonhomie___ main pehle koi easy version uthaungi..
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___Bonhomie___

@HaSh_browwn woh Victorian era ki hai maine toh pehli baar repeat mein kai baar lines padhi hain aur jo nahi samajh aata tha woh google se samjha pehli baar complete krne mein bahot time laga but uske baad enjoyable ho gaya toh ushe padhne ke baad baaki classic novel easy ho gayi padhne mein
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HaSh_browwn

@HaSh_browwn yes...uk once I picked Pride and Prejudice, but aadhi mein chhodni padi, unki english pata nhi kaunse era ki thi, zyada samajh nhi aayi..(⁠T⁠T⁠)
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HaSh_browwn

Hey !!! I saw that you read Shikwe ? How was it for you ?

HaSh_browwn

@___Bonhomie___ Yassss...she is a great writer 
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___Bonhomie___

@HaSh_browwn, it was really good; I must say, the author has amazing writing skills. I loved the characters.
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