@RandomKaahani, I read the story because I thought the plot was good, but I lost interest midway because I wanted the male leads to maturely communicate and seek therapy, which they didn't. The ex-drama dragged on too long, especially with the early marriage discussion. It would have been better to give closure to Aarzoo or address her situation more fully, rather than stretching the story. The miscommunication persisted until the end, and Aarzoo's miscarriage was treated lightly by her and her husband. They should have handled it better. The story became messy, especially since the people around them are mature and lawyers, but I don't mean to be rude; this is just my review. When I started your book, I expected a mature couple who openly communicate and resolve issues quickly—something I rarely see on Wattpad. Unfortunately, that wasn't the case with your story. Anyway, good luck with your future writing. :)
