Hey, i was wondering if you wanted to do a read for read? I read your message to BelWatson and was just wondering, I'd love feedback too!! If you don't want to that's fine but just wondering :)
Hi I read your story and I am in love with it already! I voted it I think. In new so wouldn't really know sorry...But anyways you should keep updating and soon because I know that you said that you wanted feedback and well here it is.... You Gould make it that Lou stops the car to help you an inside the car a couple if the boys are there as well and it's very cliche I know but it would be cool. I would also really appreciate it if you read my story and gave me feedback as well? I would love it if you could so please do! Thankyou Xx