kaushi_wrts1
Hey!(>.<)y-~
I wanted to ask you something.
Are you able to feel everything I’m writing?
I’m not really confused about the storyline itself, but I’ve been wondering whether my writing is actually conveying the emotions the way I intend it to. (^.^)
I want to know if the feelings I’m trying to express are reaching you while you read.(^-^)
So if you’re free, please let me know your thoughts. I’d really appreciate your feedback.( 〃▽〃)
kaushi_wrts1
@___pizza actually I wanted to show her overthinking self through her talking to her subconsious self and even lord shiva. She is a girl who believes in bholenath(lord shiva) a lot, so whenever she overthinks ,she talks in her head to him. She calls lord shiva - Baba because she takes him as her universal or god father who stays and helps her in every situation. No matter what Also sometimes we overthink a lot in our own head making thousands of theories... That's what I wanted to show through that part... Hope now it's a bit clear
___pizza
@kaushi_wrts1 hey y author story is really good but sometimes I get confused like their own self conscious is talking them . Then she is talking to baba sometimes I don't understand whom she is talking and you should add more scenes of Main lead . Others wise everything is good