@Sisisworld Thank you & I appreciate the critism! I understand what you're saying, the plot is more along the lines of events leading up to the next chapter ... each chapter is trying to build on the suspense of not knowing the speaker and not knowing whats happening exactly. It's intentional. But I will definitely try and work on giving more details that let you in on him and what the plot has in store. And yes, I agree my chapters are short, I usually do them on my phone ( so they always look longer than what it actually is, haha, sorrryyy! ) & I'd love to return the favor of critiquing. THANKS SO MUCH. I DON'T USUALLY GET GOOD FEEDBACK AND THIS REALLY HELPED ME GET AN INSIGHT! (:
