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https://www.wattpad.com/1506829648?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=SG_TATA_19 Can you give me your opinion please?
@ SG_TATA_19 of course! Ask whatever you want, I studied the Naruto series more than my lessons
Please update the hidden lotus: (naruto Isekaid fanfic)
@ SamanthaJuario Sorry I am writing the chapters slowly since I have exams, but rest assured I'll updated soon
I presume you got a way I how Yumiko somehow ends up being a 4th member of team 7. I wouldn't be at all suprise if after the Chunin exams arc she made to Jonin.
Recently I've written a Jujutsu kaisen fanfic,
The oc name is Mika (inspired by my friend name (つ≧▽≦)つ) she got reincarnated in JJK world after dying, with time she will discover her status as a window, meaning she can see curses and all
(I still don't know what her cursed technique would be, so if you have any suggestions bring it in!)
I hope you all try it and tell me if I should keep writing it or not
I see, well, it's all suggestions anyway from someone who loves to write op characters, so it would be bias. I'll wait for the publishing date though
@ Bald-San such good idea, though am thinking of giving her some time-space cursed technique or perhaps a soul sealing technique (took that idea from naruto and the Uzumaki chains) so it wouldn't be too op.
Being op has it's own cons, the story would become boring if she could save all the characters (hope u understand)
Do you want her to be op? Then make her the opposite of Infinity, "Nothingness", but if you want to make it a progression type then maybe create a cursed technique that makes her sprout numerous eyes that can see weaknesses, even though that sounds strong, she have to have the actual ability to exploit them.
I really like the new chapter but can I ask? Is she joining the next chunin exam that Team 7 will join?
@ yukimakoto059 Unfortunately no, she already is a chunin, but if you mean as a supervisor is also no. But she will have an important role in the chunin exam (no more spoilers)
Can you please make more chapters, seasons and episodes stories of Naruto TV Show Series Chapters, Seasons and Episodes Stories & Naruto: Shippuden TV Show Series Chapters, Seasons and Episodes Stories & Boruto: Naruto Next Generations TV Show Series Chapters, Seasons and Episodes Stories and suffer effects aftermath from Fourth Shinobi World War III Stories for the hidden lotus: (naruto Isekaid fanfic)
Can you please make more chapters, seasons and episodes stories of Naruto TV Shows Series Chapters, Seasons and Episodes Stories & Naruto: Shippuden TV Shows Series Chapters, Seasons and Episodes Stories & Boruto: Naruto Next Generations TV Shows Series Chapters, Seasons and Episodes Stories and suffer effects aftermath from Fourth Shinobi World War III Battles Stories as soon as possible when you have time.
Hello! I hope you're doing well. I'd love it if you could check out my story. No worries if you're unable to, and feel free to delete this message if you need to. Have a great day!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/352777699?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=i_am_music_criticism
