@NiiNii112 sure your right the title is long no offence but maybe a bit too long? the shorter the sweeter like for eg mine is delicious torture and i have many more on fictionpress and another for eg (mine) is visits - about an exchange student coming to leave with a girl and her mum and brother. a title gives some insight into the story, but a long title gives away too much so it leaves less interest.. domething like 'save me..' or something i dont know :/ im sorry if you find this insulting.. yeah ill read it x) sorry for the majorly late reply :/ i feel terrible