@__tayynicole Hi. I did read it yesterday. I'm much older than your subject matter, so I don't really relate, but you have a good start. Please be careful of your spelling and grammar if you want to attract serious readers. Those things are an instant red flag to me; it can make it look like you're not serious about getting better at writing if you don't take the first steps at correcting the basics. That's my advice. I was horrible at it for years, but I kept at it. Then I became an award-winning filmmaker. But it took a LOT of hard work. Now, I'm just not quite as horrible. But my career started with the basics. Good luck!
