Your story "simons kid" would be a great story tbh! It has a great plot, etc. All you really need is to check all your spelling/punctuation/grammar.
For example; In the first chapter "simons kid". It should have been "Simon's kid" and in that you spelled his last name wrong. Don't worry it's fine, I mean everyone makes mistakes. You used cowel, but it's Cowell. (:
You also have many other things spelled wrong, but it's fine just it might be easier for people to read if you spelled everything right.
Sorry for kinda sounding like a bitch. I just thought you might want to know! ;3 Keep writing thought! You're a awesome author, you just need to work on the spelling, etc. <3
