_author_zaiba_

Chapter 16 'First night" is already posted  on scrollstck. 
          	
          	The link is in my in my conversation board. 
          	
          	It will be posted on wattpad on 2nd january. 
          	
          	For early reading you can access to my stck. I'd "_author_zaiba_"
          	
          	 https://theuser.stck.me/post/715145/16-First-Night

_author_zaiba_

@_author_zaiba_ it's 2nd february guys
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_author_zaiba_

Chapter 16 'First night" is already posted  on scrollstck. 
          
          The link is in my in my conversation board. 
          
          It will be posted on wattpad on 2nd january. 
          
          For early reading you can access to my stck. I'd "_author_zaiba_"
          
           https://theuser.stck.me/post/715145/16-First-Night

_author_zaiba_

@_author_zaiba_ it's 2nd february guys
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KoumudiRoy

Hello author, I was reading your story ''the subliminal wish''. There's something I want to let you know - it's really hard to read your story, not because the storyline (the story line has potential) but the writing style and wording makes it seem like a 13 year old wetdream (yes you heard me right) 
          Now how you take this comment is up to you - you may take it as criticism or hatred as you like. I read total 6 chapters and it was hell like there's no connection between the paragraphs, timeskips without context, grammatical errors and so on. 
          Your stories really do have potential but try to improve your writing skills. 

KoumudiRoy

@KoumudiRoy Don't blame yourself too much. Handling studies as well as a creative passion can get difficult at times. When you get overwhelmed try to take rest and come back with a fresh mind. Remember you not only have criticisers like me you have supportes too. 
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_author_zaiba_

@KoumudiRoy well thank you for taking your precious time reading my story. And yes about my writing I do need to improve myself. It happened as I was so much in rushing and publishing too early. But thank you for your support, and yes from now on I'll improve my writing style. And there was even one thing more, that I'm still studying and it's difficult to manage both writing and studies. But that doesn't justify my incorrect writing style, so yeah I'll continue to improve myself. And i Would be glad if you continue reading my story. Thanks for reading. 
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