Hello author, I was reading your story ''the subliminal wish''. There's something I want to let you know - it's really hard to read your story, not because the storyline (the story line has potential) but the writing style and wording makes it seem like a 13 year old wetdream (yes you heard me right)
Now how you take this comment is up to you - you may take it as criticism or hatred as you like. I read total 6 chapters and it was hell like there's no connection between the paragraphs, timeskips without context, grammatical errors and so on.
Your stories really do have potential but try to improve your writing skills.