_authorzaara_

Hey everyone! 
          	
          	I can't believe it's been officially one year since I started this story, and we've just hit an incredible milestone—100k views!  I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown throughout this journey. Every read, comment, and message means the world to me.
          	
          	This community has been such an inspiration, and I can't wait to keep creating for you. I’ve been working on new stories, so stay tuned for updates soon! Feel free to drop your ideas on the kind of stories you'd love to see next—your input is always welcome.  
          	
          	Once again, thank you all for being such an amazing part of this journey. Your support keeps me going, and I’m excited to see where we go from here. Let's keep building this world together, one story at a time. ✨
          	
          	Much love,  
          	Zaara

Ganesh_62

@_authorzaara_ @_authorzaara_  The overall plot of "Kadhal en Kaviye" is decent. I found this story on random scroll through after I almost gave up on wattpad stories with mundane plot, rich in grammatical errors.
          	  
          	  Your work is commendable for the textual representation of various extremes of emotions, ease of reading, minimal grammatical errors. One more appreciable thing is that you mentioned the mature content chapter wise, making it easy for readers who are uncomfortable with it to navigate. 
          	  
          	  Coming to the plot, I appreciate the "not so matrilineal" representation of hidden love unlike other wattpad creators. The characterisation of parents (& in-laws) captures the realistic essence of conservative, patriarchal households, especially Tamil, (or Indian, but I found it very much something I see live everyday). Kudos to that.
          	  
          	  And I love the graphic on the title card, as that somehow for me represents the story in entirety.
          	  
          	  Coming to the areas I felt where you can improve (just suggestions, as I expect more good works from you), Navigating through the story exemplifying different scenes should not be hurried. For example, I felt the sequence where, shruthi experiences harassment, her husband provides her all the support and they kinda start getting close (very good one though), might have been little paced up. 
          	  
          	  I can understand your line of thought a little bit that building trust would bring people closer in relationship, but just for the sake of good storyline, you could have added some real life scenarios like the victim going through therapy or counselling, for which her husband supports unconditionally etc etc. These small sequences just stretches story a bit, sends positive message to readers against the taboos and helps in character building a bit more too. 
          	  
          	  I don't have time and patience for regular updates and I read like 25-30 chapters on breaks. So I'm expecting a lot of good work from you. 
          	  
          	  Keep it coming <3
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Bhavana_Prakash

Hey, buddy. I hope you are doing great. Sorry for being an intruder. Could you spare some time to check out my story RISKY ISHQ..... It's completed....And feel free to read my new book TRULY, MADLY, DEEPLY... I have worked really hard... Thank you so much for your time... Bye

author_myra

Sorry to post it here
          please check out my story..
          A arranged marriage  love story..
          
          Meet agni and sakshi..
          A guy with his high temper and ego weds a girl who has an very traumatising past..yet resilient and doesn't yield to him..
          Watch their love journey turn from hate to love....
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/377528682?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=author_myra