DIORSWRLD
um soooo im assuming no tomoko update?
DIORSWRLD
whatever you think is best pookie!! your writing is so good and the flow of the book is rlly good too, not too fast paced and not extremely slow plus i love her background/story i do think she could bend a different element or maybe wield a different flame color yk to show her expertise idk
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@DIORSWRLD honestly, I've written and rewritten the beginning parts again and again. I want to rewrite Tomoko's story after I finish school next semester, because I've not let her go. I've had so much character lore develop, including the relationships with her mother's tribe, Oma being someone who has a lot more power than she seems, Oko actually having bending (but is it firebending? ). I wasn't sure if folks still wanted to read it, I wrote most of the first chapters during quarantine when I was 16 with my best friend
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