Ok cool. So, I read the first chapter and although this genre is not what I normally read I actually really enjoyed it. Not only do I see a great plot coming but your grammatical errors r VERY minimal. And that hardly ever happens on watt pad cuz a lot of people aren't the best at grammar. But I really enjoyed your writing and the only thing I caught while reading it was when u finish a quote like "Hello Bob," she said. U always put a comma after the last word but before the quote. Other than that, everything was perfect. ;)