Crispy Biscuit

Hey I just wrote a story it has only three parts and i would love it if you read it and gave me feedback and advice on the book so I can become a good writer just like you. Its called Unscripted and it features what I call a Rebel and a Knight. So please read it and tell me if you like it and what I can do to make it better.
          Thanks.

Hi @_biscuit-,
          
          This is terribly belated, but I wanted to come by and thank you for the follow! Wishing you an amazing week ahead. xx
          
          ~ Corlaya

thanks for following I appreciate it so I followed you back 

Thanks for following, and pls consider reading my book.
          Bye luv ya

thanks for the follow! :)

hey,please try my story.
          it is called"Come dance for a stranger".