Heyoo sissy ,
I assume you are a new writer just like me. How about we support eachothers books? You read and vote on mine *genuinely* and I'll do the same. Seal the deal by checking it out in my profile. *pucchi*
So, in the three chapters I've made some edits+correction, kindly check it or you'll get confused, sorry for the inconvenience
~ Your Pyara Writer Donut