Alice Wallaby

Will you please read my story ???

@_critic_ IOf you're a critic then I need one. I mainly would like you to check out If Alice were a boy? buit I would like it if you'd check my others also. And don't worry, I won't cry and give you a temper tantrum if you're harsh about it. Just please don't post remarks about the sexual orientation of my characters because the I'll ignore you and go to someone else. Thanks.

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          Im sorry for barging into your MB, and also the excessive tagging.
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/974645-the-deathly-stratagem
          
          Please read and support this. You can start by voting and commenting " WIN or FAIL" along with what you want to say. any type of criticism is accepted. (though i would want some constructive ones XD)
          If you happen to like the story, please fan me.
          (im not a fan whore or something but it would be easier to inform you that there is an update.)
          
          Im sorry if i bothered you, but please do spare me some of your time. XDD
          
          ~Josh
          
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          Scary!  ^_^   but im gonna wait for your comments, even if it kills me XDD. i do hope that its not one of the "What's hot cliche stories" that you're talking about XDD.
          
          Live long and more power.  Including criticisms i guess XDD

Hey. I just saw someone reply to your comment. I appreciated your guts and honesty so here I am.  It takes a lot of guts to do what you are doing.  To review and crticise some of the so called "hot books", I presume there are a lot of people targeting you because you point out the mistakes in people's works. I agree with you, most of the so called popular stories are very predictable. But I would like to suggest @ashful books to you. I found the book written and the one that she's currently writing just amazing. It has no mistakes or bad grammar. It is historical fiction. I think you should check out her books, they are awesome :)

I'm happy to see someone on here who's honest and understands what an actual story entails.  Also, I laughed when I saw you're starting with the what's hot list :)

I would gladly appreciate if you would critic my works :) Bring it all on! There's nothing I can't handle, if it means improving on my craft :)
          http://www.wattpad.com/2292867-backstage-pass
          http://www.wattpad.com/2286928-teacher%27s-pet

Ooh finally, a critic! :D  Haha I too am known for my brutal honesty, but I'd love a second opinion on my own work. Would you mind giving Fate a critique? :3

Hello there. I was wondering if you would like to critique my story, Beneath the Earth. It's only four chapters and I'd love to know what you think. I don't care if you're brutally honest and won't report you for stating your opinions. :)
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/1514319-beneath-the-earth

@cliche How...exquisite :)

@BrokenStories Reading now.