_dancefreak11

@allhayletheking Yep! No problem. And also could you maybe check out mine?

Davidpgbooks

Hi Kat I saw you posted on my profile a few months ago sorry I haven't gotten back to you this the first time in a while that I have had some time to spare.  I will read your story for sure and please feel free to read any of my stories I have plenty to choose from and they are all different genres.  Hope you have a great day and feel free to message me if you want to chat take care.

sudney35

@_dancefreak11 hey just being honest. The only reason I'm picky about writing style is because of my teacher last year. He has his priorities and he showed me good sentance structure and now I feel like anything I wrote before is a failure. The second book I happen to be writing.... I find t much better than the first one. Every time you write you get better. Never give up.

sudney35

Hey, so I checked out the first chapter of 'masked' you have great ideas and a talent for writing. In my opinion it's a little bumpy but that maybe be because it's 1 am. I'm gonna keep reading despite the fact that I'm not entirely sure about how you're writing it. I like the way you have you're own writing style. It's good. Every author needs one. If you put in a bit more sentance and word diversity I sincerely thing you could get this published and that's only after the first chapter.