Hey, so I checked out the first chapter of 'masked' you have great ideas and a talent for writing. In my opinion it's a little bumpy but that maybe be because it's 1 am. I'm gonna keep reading despite the fact that I'm not entirely sure about how you're writing it. I like the way you have you're own writing style. It's good. Every author needs one. If you put in a bit more sentance and word diversity I sincerely thing you could get this published and that's only after the first chapter.