joc_zun
Your book reborn so far is really good. Though in some parts I feel as if you are going a bit too fast and don't really show the character feelings. Other than that your book is really going along smoothly and you got me hooked since the prologue.
_erin_nicole
@joc_zun Thank you mush for the feedback, I am glad you like so far and I'll try my best in future chapter to put more feelings into it. :) Also thanks for the follow.
