FangirlingForFun
THANKS FOR FOLLOWING!!!
anaverageteensmind
the idea of the story is pretty nice.
but the grammer mistakes and all the grammatic stuff causes a break in the flow. other than that it's pretty good. work on paragraphing and the grammer and I'm sure the book will be awesome .
_hurricane_2002
@anaverageteensmind I know I just realised I wrote striked instead of struck so yaa stupid of me