_missea

Chapter 1 of Enamored Series #1 is up now!

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_missea

Hi, I just published one of my story again. I previously unpublished it because I don't have the courage to continue writing but now I found myself coming back in writing I guess I just can't stop writing since it's one of my passion. I hope you will still continue to support me, in my journey.
          
          Happy Morning guys!
          
          -_missea

nevingongju

Hi there missy! Here's my feedback;
          
          I noticed the spacing, well that's how your writing style is. Well, don't over do the spacing. Next, there's an error in using “your” and “you're”, try to read as well your work and change it for the better. Example, the title itself, “Encoding You're Taste”, is it you're or your? Also the capitalization of the words.
          
          All in all, I think your story is good once completedm After all, all our works is part of our creative minds and imagination. Just keep writing! I'll always be glad to say my feedback.
          
          Head Master^^

_missea

@nevingongju Hala thank you po mukhang spacing talaga ang problem ko but thank you hihihi. i'll keep that in my mind
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francinee04

HI! Pretty president ng gc, 
          
          Feedback: 
          
          At first nakita kona agad ang spacing mo. Maganda naman din ang kwento mo, pag patuloy mo lang yun. May ilan words akong nakita na kailangan may " - " para iwas sa mali. We have home for improvement. Keep it up! 
          
          Goodluck?! :)

_missea

@francinee04 Hala thank you po hindi ko ata nakita Thank you Po!!!!!
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francinee04

@francinee04 nasa iyo naman ang desisyon for spacing, kase yun agad makita mo. Baka mamis interpret mo
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