Hi there missy! Here's my feedback;
I noticed the spacing, well that's how your writing style is. Well, don't over do the spacing. Next, there's an error in using “your” and “you're”, try to read as well your work and change it for the better. Example, the title itself, “Encoding You're Taste”, is it you're or your? Also the capitalization of the words.
All in all, I think your story is good once completedm After all, all our works is part of our creative minds and imagination. Just keep writing! I'll always be glad to say my feedback.
Head Master^^