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YoUr username is chaotic af

I love ur name it's so unique it's great ❤

@striker-night-walker i thinks thats really good and i dont see a lot of stories like that for creepypasta characters but the only thing i have to say is check your grammer just a little

@striker-night-walker its alright do you have any ideas

@striker-night-walker does or dosnt

@striker-night-walker ok thats good and does she have a backstory

@striker-night-walker yes and maybe give her a weakness and does she have a backstory

@striker-night-walker ok i am sorry if this offends you in any way this is just personal changes i would make 
          I notice this a lit with creepypasta oc's and most of the time they are extremely strong and tall. In the character sheet it said between 5'5" and 7 foot so maybe just have a good inbetween as an average height like 6'4" and with strength i would say make her a little weaker or give her a disability such as flash backs or maybe a phisical disability. And i didnt really understand the backstory so if you have one would you please tell me and one last thing is that the colors are not complementary so maybe just find a matching color scheme and leave one color to stand out against the rest,  but otherwise i actuall really enjoy her and like the idea and art

@striker-night-walker would you mind if i did a few critiques on her first

@striker-night-walker yea that would help lol