ani_dn

Hey, nice chapter . Very good descriptions of the scenes. But, please, use quotation marks when characters speak. It's a little confusing without them. The mystery if the first chapter still not solved though.
          

ani_dn

Yeah, I know. It happened to me several times. Really annoying. But this is only a problem of the downloaded app. If you log in directly to the site on internet, and post there, the problem is solved, at least for me was.
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_pan_cake_04

@ ani_dn  ahhh OK. I wrote the chapter on the computer and it looks like wattpad deleted them as I loaded the chapter up
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_pan_cake_04

@ ani_dn  if everything was solved at the start it wouldn't be interesting would it? :) concerning the quotation marks, I thought I had put them there, but I will check again! Thank you for your tips! 
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