@Maknae-sshi I took a look on your work and it was not bad, eventhough I don't ship any of the four pairs. No offense hahaha. But the first few chapters were kind of boring and cliche and I don't like any of those in a fanfic. I also noticed some vocabulary and grammatical error, but those cannot be avoided, right? Finally, I think the chapters are too short and doesn't complete the idea of the situation. But despite that, I think your book is good, the arrangement is ok and organized. I hope my review helps. :))
-지아