Theanonymousreader

Hi anonymous, 
          
          I am a new author on this platform and I have recently started my very first book on AbhiRa.
          
          I would greatly appreciate it if you can please give it a read and provide your feedback.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/357810822-dastaan-jo-likhun
          
          Any suggestion, feedback and opinion would be greatly appreciated. 
          
          Thanks :)