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@Anami_Scribes You can choose The Velvet Hour or The Last Heartbeat , read both so you can see which one you like more :)
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Anami_Scribes

@Anami_Scribes which book should I vote on? 
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Back after a long time! take a look at my new story called The Last Heartbeat <3
          Enjoy!!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/405601846

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@_henaam_ tysm for ur comment , i have sum ideas in my mind for the future chapters :) 
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horlahmidey25

hi, henaam Your writing and world building are strong the atmosphere and isolation really land. If you’re aiming to develop this into a romance story, the biggest opportunity is introducing connection as conflict.
            Right now the character survives alone, which works, but romance will thrive when someone enters who challenges that isolation. In a world this dangerous, caring about someone should feel risky not comforting. That tension is where a powerful slow burn romance can live.
            I can help you shape the romance arc by
            Introducing a love interest who creates emotional and survival stakes
            Strengthening internal longing and vulnerability
            Developing a slow burn dynamic that fits the wasteland tone
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