MagmaPheonix
Hey, I gathered up some courage and I started writing a story/fan fiction that has been playing with my mind since I was a little kid. From the till now iam making some realy good improvements about it . So would like to give feed back on it...? Please. Thank you.
_trixxter
Hii~ @MagmaPheonix I have already read your story and it's quite interesting to read. Although I have noticed some mistakes, some needed to be improvised especially the grammars, oh and also it's supposed to be 'Sasha' not 'Shasa' hehehe... That's all that I have noticed in your work but it's alright since this is your first time writing a story. Keep up the good work and I hope this message helps. <3