a-tale-to-tell

Out now
          	I just published "The Evidence " of my story "Seceret In The Shallows". https://my.w.tt/zhf1w8Hed6

plainfac

⇨ ʜᴇʟʟᴏ! ʟᴇᴛ's sᴜᴘᴘᴏʀᴛ ᴇᴀᴄʜ ᴏᴛʜᴇʀ! ♡ ɪ ᴀᴍ ᴡʀɪᴛɪɴɢ ᴀ sᴛᴏʀʏ ʏᴏᴜ ᴍɪɢʜᴛ ʙᴇ ɪɴᴛᴇʀᴇsᴛᴇᴅ ɪɴ. ɪᴛ's ᴀ ʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴄᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ᴀ ᴍʏsᴛᴇʀʏ! ɪ ᴀᴍ ᴀʟsᴏ ᴡʀɪᴛɪɴɢ ᴀ ʜᴏʀʀᴏʀ ɴᴏᴠᴇʟ ᴀs ᴡᴇʟʟ. ☽ ɪ ᴡɪʟʟ ɢʟᴀᴅʟʏ ᴄʜᴇᴄᴋ ʏᴏᴜ ᴏᴜᴛ! ᴘʟᴇᴀsᴇ sᴇᴇ ᴍᴇ ᴀs ᴡᴇʟʟ! 

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@plainfac Sure. Check out my story and I will check out yours
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a-tale-to-tell

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Hey guys
          
          I just wanted y'all to know that I am going to delete the dumb book of mine because its so dumb and isn't really working out and romance isn't my cup of tea so thats that. 

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@HAve_Some_holy_water the book so far is so good. Why'd you delete it
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A-telltale-heart

@HAve_Some_holy_water no. No. Sis you ain't doin' that
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LunaLovegood1o1

Your book is pretty well written. There are some grammatical errors but like o get no right to talk since mine is filled with grammatical errors. I think you should give your characters there own P. O. V. It can help give readers a glimpse into a characters mind. It can help show how that character is feeling. But that’s just a suggestion. I think your story is pretty good. Well,now if you’ll excuse me I’ve got o get ready for skool. Have a good day!

a-tale-to-tell

@LunaLovegood1o1 Thanks for the advice :)
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