aBrokenAngel

 #353 in humor! Thank you so much. ♡ 

AvonBlue

Welp I tried to read your book, but I couldn't comment. I can still read it though. As I've said, sometimes I get updates but then I forget that it did. And sometimes I don't get informed at all. But I'll just say that you should keep the chapters and publish it, humor books are not only humor. They should have a bit of mix, most famous humor books I read also have depressing chapters, and dark moments. The story was turning out great. 
          
          
          Just saying and please don't take it as offensive since I'm trying not to make it sound like it,
          
          Don't always listen to the readers(says me, a reader lol) its your story, and it is made by your ideas. Not theirs
          
          
          
          
          
          That's all ciao

aBrokenAngel

Thank you so much ♡ don't worry about it. I'm just taking a break and editing it majorly on the way. It's on private right now but soon I'll publish it again when I feel satisfied with it. Thanks so much for this. It really helps me out ♡ @AvonBlue
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LemonBlast

I love your book The Golden Days Of My Life and for some reason it says it is unable to read. When I searched the title, the last two parts were available and now it is saying the book is nonexistent. Is this an error or did you delete the book? I would really like to know because I am interested in your work so please let me know. :) 
          -M

aBrokenAngel

Oh yes I made it private because I'm taking a small break and editing on the way because I felt that my work was getting sloppy. Sorry for not saying anything about it. Don't worry I'll put it back up soon. Thanks for reading ❤️ @LemonBlast 
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ThyInkress_

Hi, hello, aloha etc;) first of, I admire your writing style. I LOVE YOUR BOOK! (TGDOML) Could do with some editing though :)
          So, I read your profile and it says that you do book covers. I'd really love for you to make one for my new (and first)book. 
          Have I mentioned that I love your book?
          Thanks. :);)OwO

aBrokenAngel

And yeah I know I am currently editing it and have done so for the first 4 chapters 
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aBrokenAngel

Yeah sure just private message me and I'll send you my email so you could send me the pic you want me to edit 
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aBrokenAngel

Okayyyy no problem 
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HollyDouglas5

Hi, I have been reading your book and commenting. 
          You had said that people asked you to be more descriptive I did give you a hint in the comments. 
          If you have time to read there are a few authors I've been reading on Wattpad that are amazing with descriptions you feel like you are there or what the characters feel. 
          They are @Whiskeyqueenn --especially The Girl Who Stole My World; @TeaNHeartache--anything she writes; AmythestWinter--anything she writes. 
          Any of these writers are very descriptive in their stories.
          
          I give my hat off to you I haven't noticed any incorrect spelling or odd sentences. These are usually easy for me to find since I make these errors myself which of course I can't see because I wrote them. My most common mistake is that my head is way ahead of my fingers. 
          Congrats on your story. I will continue to read and comment. 
          Thank you for sharing your talent. 
          Holly
          
          

aBrokenAngel

Thank you so much and I sure will check those books out! ♡ 
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