Laura Richardson

Please read the chapters I've published so far and give me any constructive feedback that you like. I really like my idea for this book so I'm open to all suggestions . Thank you!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/345213357

I added introductions of the characters. I want to write more but I need more views and comments so I can know where to take this.
          I just published "Introductions" of my story "THEIR SISTER'S SECRET". https://www.wattpad.com/1173518109?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=aaronsgirl91&wp_originator=uSb0kmFC4t4mXPmS09pfngQRy4GFsWwOtf0eCC1zsu9C3SusOu9%2FFC5%2FpUvr0STc61G8VWfANry1NbPh9fY%2FwxIUDgKbpD9CzDJW%2BMFEL7V3n4MwxhtQU2qsQhIgY0rb

This is the first story I've posted in a while. Please critique me but be respectful. I'm open to all suggestions. 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/290356242

@Smokingbody1 I just updated :)

@Smokingbody1 I am...I just get so busy. I'm a single mom to two girls. I have easy started the next chapter. I just haven't finished it. Kind of stuck.

Are you going to update?

@GrahamCracker2001 you are very welcome. you have talent

@Kaeecoee You are very welcome! You are a great writer!

@LauraDiemer Thank you SO MUCH for all the votes! :D

Thank you for following :)