rileyroberts_
Hi I would really appreciate if you might read one of my stories and see what you think, I only started yesterday. Link: https://www.wattpad.com/566367299-new-dawn-chapter-one-new-town
abarter
@rileyroberts_ I love your story line, it looks like its going to be a great plot. I left a few constructive criticism points through out the story, your welcome to delete them if you don't agree. Feel free to come back to me if you don't get what I was saying or if you want some more help, for I will be more than happy to help if you want it.