queen abby

Hi, I'm a beginner writer and am wondering if anyone could read my book and leave their opinion. Or even feedback to what they thought. I would be really grateful.
          
          https://my.w.tt/x8atm34fh7

Will you be finishing my brothers best friend is my mate

When will you update my brothers bestfriend is my mate? 

Hi guys!!
          
          I'm still alive!! I have exams next week and then im done with school!!
          
          So i'm currently trying to edit some of my earlier chapters on MBBFIMM and ive been getting some messages to update and blah blah. i update whenever i have time. writing is just a hobby of mine that i hope to make a job, but you have to work hard to get there. 
          
          also, i cannot thank you enough for taking your time to read MBBFIMM because my baby has 50K reads!! That blows my mind. Thank you for everything!!
          
          xoxo

ALSO 28.9K READS?!?!?! 
          
          OH MY HEART!!! I LOVE YOU ALL!!! I JUST WANNA HUG YOU ALL *gives hug*
          
          xoxo
          
          p.s i srsly need to sleep. its like 2am and i have exams this week UGHHHHHH

JUST POSTED A a/n IN MBBFIMM SO GO CHECK IT OUT ON WHY I'VE BEEN GONE!!!
          
          ugh i miss you guys so much :((
          
          xoxo

Just posted a new MBBFIMM chapter, it might be a little "blah" because i've been SUPER busy with school. i've been trying to get over some writers block, and  life. 
          
          my bday is this weekend and im kind of bummed about tbh. 
          1. my dad is gone for business p.s this is the SECOND bday of mine he has missed due to business
          2. all i really want is an iphone but i know i wont get one bcuz i have to pay for it but im broke af
          3. im not really celebrating my bday
          
          wow im so cheerful *sarcasm hands* 
          ANYWAY, im so grateful for the support, please keep commenting and voting!
          
          xoxo

im legit still alive. still. 
          
          im sorry i haven't updated, im working on new chapters. soon, i promise ;)
          
          1. send in covers for MBBFIMM!! that would be awesome!
          2. should i make a facebook group? would you guys join in? send me feedback ;)
          3. i really miss you guys :( school is really busy for me and we recently had a teacher get into a bad car crash and passed away so it took a toll on my school. 
          
          xoxo

IM SORRY!!! I AM STILL ALIVE
          
          I WILL UPDATE MBBFIMM WHEN WE GET TO 700 VOTES
          
          school is hard and busy. also i just had my homecoming last weekend, and it was lit. 
          
          ANYWAY 
          
          have a nice day xoxo

JUST UPDATED MAWA!!!
          
          I WILL HOPEFULLY BE GETTING ANOTHER UPDATE OUT THERE SOON